Audience Feedback- Year 13's

Today, we recieved audience feedback from some year 13 A2 Media students. This was helpful as it allowed a fresh pair of eyes to evaluate our product, meaning that they could spot improvments and problems that we hadn't noticed. Here are some notes on what they said;

    Improvments

• "Make sure it doesn't turn into a horror, as the little girl looks like a conventional character you'd see in a horror film". When we asked how we could resolve this problem, she suggested that we choose a soundtrack that is more conventional of the Thriller genre
• "In the scene of the daughter in the garden, include a child-like soundtrack to create a chilling atmosphere"
• "How will you be ending your product? I think you should link back to the mother/daughter relationship."

     Good points

• "I like the shot of the worms in her hand, it really does look creepy. Which means the technique was effective"
• "The use of opacity in the teddy bear shot its good, it confuses the audience"
• "Using a voiceover in the mothers scene is a good idea, it will allow the audience to understand the plot better. And it's a convention of genre."